So I've been working away on the level 2 dialogue now. I have done a first draft of this which is basically giving what needs to be said. I now need to do a redraft of that including the character voice concepts. Then I will get together with a small group to make it better, before finally doing a final redraft. I will then have to find some people and do some voice acting.
We were also all assigned to look at the latest build of the game, and look at errors. The main errors I found were the pears could walk through things, and sometimes the jump stops working when on ramps. Balancing wise the jump has been changed and now feels alot nicer. There are also a few problems with the gore, as it messes up when it hits corners, and the amount that spawns needs to be balanced.
I shall now go sort out the level 2 dialogue and test toonshading on the character